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SasuNaru Chapter 7

Sasuke wakes up, a bit surprised. Forgetting that he had come home last night. He was used to Naruto's tiny apartment, and not used to his huge house. 'We should really be crashing here. There's alot more space for two people...'

Thinking about how him and Naruto both blew things out of porportion last night, he went out to the kitchen to pour some cereal. He kept going over last nights events in his head. Wondering why they freaked out over something so little. When it came down to it, he knew that it all really happend because of the sexual tention that was going on between them. It wasn't really either of their faults. Sasuke starts to feel guilty for leaving Naruto like that, all alone.

'I shouldn't take it out on Naruto, we will do it when he's ready.I just wish i wasn't so anxious!' Little to Sasuke's knowledge, Naruto was ready.He had finally gotten over the fact that they were both guys, he loved Sasuke and thats all that really mattered. But the state he was in wouldn't allow him to do the deed.

Sasuke decided that he should go over to Naruto's to apologize. Sasuke hadn't noticed, but his personality had changed drasticly since he started dating Naruto. He used to cover up his feelings by treating Naruto as a rival, and since he wasn't with the person he had feelings for, he used to take his anger out on those around him, and was generally just a jack ass. But now that he was with Naruto he has chilled out alot, and has become a lot softer and more of an emotional person. Something no one had seen or expected in Sasuke.

Sasuke was on his way to Naruto's when he came across Ino's flower shop. He walked in looking at the different flowers. 'I wonder what kind of flowers the dobe likes....I guess roses are the traditional flower to give when you've fucked up real bad.'

"Hey Sasuke!" Ino says energeticly
"Hi Ino. You think i could get a dozen...no, two dozen roses?" Sasuke says looking up at the prices.
"Mmm, ladies man has a date?" She says gathering up the roses.
"No..they're for a friend" He says back.
"Oh, for Naruto?" She says wraping them into a boquet, and adding baby's breath.
Saskues eyes open wide, and jaw drops open a little bit, 'does she know?'.
Ino to busy to notice, finishes with saying "Yeah i heard he was rushed to Tsunade this morning!"
"Wait, WHAT?!" Sasuke says, now looking very worried.
"You..you didn't know? i...I just assumed..these were for.." She studders.
"What happend?!" he raises his voice.
"Um..Shikamaru came by this morning to get some flowers, i guess he and Kiba went over to Naruto's bright and early this morning and found him passed out... They rushed him to the hospital. Thats about all i know, shikamaru had to get back to the hospital.
Sasuke grabbed the flowers from Ino, threw some money on the counter and ran out of the store.
"Wait, Sasuke, this is too much!" Ino yells after him. He just keeps running.

When he finally reaches the hospital on the other side of town, he is bent over out of breath. He looks up at the receptionist.
"Nar-uto" he says panting.
"Down the hall to the right" She said pointing.

When he gets to the end of the hall he sees both Kiba and Shikamaru sitting there. Kiba moves his water bottle from the seat next to him, and Sasuke immeaditely sits down there, still panting.

"Is he doing ok?" Sasuke asks inpaintanly.

Kiba looks at his feet, and Shikamaru looks at a wall. Sasuke stands up and yells at them. Shikamaru gets to his feet, grabs Sasuke's arm and takes him around the corner into an empty waiting room, shutting the door behind them.

"Whats going on Shikamaru, tell me!" He shouts urgently.

"Naruto...he's...he's in a...a coma..." Shikamaru studders, trying to look Sasuke straight in his eyes.

"What..what?! I...wha...No, i have to go see him!" Sasuke says as he starts to turn around. But Shikamaru grabs him.

"There is no way your going to get in there. Tsunade has Kakashi gaurding his door. No one is allowed in except her until she says. So be smart, wait out here with us."

" That stupid bitch..." Sasuke mutters loudly.

"Come on, lets give those flowers to the nurse so we can get them in some water. Im sure Naruto will love them." Shikamaru says calmly, acting like he didn't hear what Sasuke just said.

They go to the nurses station and put all the roses in a vase and fill it with water. They then go and return to their seats.

"Woah, those are nice flowers Sasuke, and ALOT of flowers. All those for Naruto? I didn't know you guys were so close!" Kiba says looking over at him.

Sasuke looks down at the 24 rozes. He thinks of his poor Naruto lying in there, unconsious, in the cold, bare hospital room...

"No, here" He takes 12 rozes out and gives them to Kiba, then takes the other 12 rozes and takes them over to Shikamaru "These are for you guys. Thank you for saving Naruto. He could be dead if you two hadn't had stopped by what you did! So agian, thank you very much." Sasuke says with a bow. He then turns around taking off down the hallway turning twoards the exit around the corner.

"Wow. Where did he go?" Kiba asks Shikamaru.
"I don't know yet, but i'm sure we'll know soon" Shikamaru Replied.
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Next Chpater ---> [link]


I know there are some spelling errors and just some regular errors XD But there has been such a high demand for this chapter,so i had to get it out there!

I was in the hospital for a hip replacement and then was later hospitalized for a 103 temp and an infection. So i wrote as much as i could between the hospital visits,and some while i was in.

The next chapter will br great, and i'm already working on it! :)
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:icontaybadger2147:
TayBadger2147 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey, why isn't chapter 8 working!?
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Nicki7771 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student General Artist
nice ending (to chapter 10 i mean XD)be doo be doo be doo
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Gumbah Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thank you! :)
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bearhug18 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
Won't let me see that next chapter :( ...want to read it!!!"
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:icongumbah:
Gumbah Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I have links to the other chapters in a journal . They wouldn't let me have it on here because of mature content. 
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bearhug18 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
OK where's the link?
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Gumbah Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
www.y-gallery.net/user/gumbah/ <--- thats where the missing chapters are. They are all on there. You might have to make a username and password, but make sure you say your 18 or older if your not. Otherwise i dont think you will be able to view them.
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Tomkesm Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Next one now!!!!! So intense and awesome!!
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:icongumbah:
Gumbah Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
They are already done. It's in one of my journals. They wouldn't let me have it on this site because of mature content.
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:icontomkesm:
Tomkesm Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Where can I find that? I'm still not sure how it all works really.
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Iveth1 Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
😭😭😭
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Iveth1 Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
������������������������������I can read the next chap..
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Gumbah Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
If you look through my journals you can find links to the other chapters. I had them on here but they took them down and banished me for awhile due to mature content.
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sasunaruneechan Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
cant read the next chapter either... can you please re-upload it? i dont want another graet sasunaru story to stop just when its getting sooo sad. (this is the second sasunaru story ive read that stops whit an oh-no feelin and the question are they gonna get together again?) please please continue!!!
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Gumbah Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
It was taken down due to content. And I was banned for awhile. But if you look in my journal archives, there is two chapters linked in there because it wasn't aloud on here.
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:icontomkesm:
Tomkesm Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why not
Just finish with the story and not the whole sexual part then? It's a really great story and I really want to see the end maybe you could rewrite it?
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:icongumbah:
Gumbah Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You can read the ending on y-gallery.
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SealMyFate Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student General Artist
>.< damn! when i clicked for the next chapter, it says it doesnt exist!!! make some more. i want naruto to be okay. and i want him and sasuke to finally do it for once. <3 kyaaa!! its just too stressful right now in this chapter, use your magic writing skills and make naruto all better pwease? :'c
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:icongumbah:
Gumbah Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
It was taken down due to content. And I was banned for awhile. But if you look in my journal archives, there is two chapters linked in there because it wasn't aloud on here.
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BassyBenitz Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Window
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RavynFeather Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I read the last few chapters in the Y! gallery and I loved the whole "and they lived happily ever after, THE END" it was so adorable and I'm not usually into that sort of stuff. There were a few grammatical errors and please take no offense from this, but it may be a good idea for you to go over some of the basics in grammar. Things like which "to" to use or when to use "than rather than "then."
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eternal-curse Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
oh my god i am on the edge of my seat and unable to focus on my work o.o
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RavynFeather Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OH my God I hope you're okay
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RaibowKittyGumdrops Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh snap its getting real up in hear
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hetalianturtle17 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
Can I have a Link for the next chapter cause my computer doesn't get it...
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Gumbah Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, they deleted chapter 8 and 9 :( Somebody narked on me, saying it was too perverted.

But, i put them up on the yaoi gallery. The links are in my current journal here --> [link]

Enjoy! :D
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hetalianturtle17 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Okay thanks so much :3
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caitlyn-dickerson Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Student General Artist
what happened to the next chapter?DA says it doesnt exist
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AmericaTheHero97 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
naru-chan D: why do you have to keep passing out from hot water? T~T
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Creastmoom3 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
Noo Naru-chan DONT DIE!!!!
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Kanna-Chick-Rona Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012
The way sasu says it: "That stupid bitch"
The way naruto would say it: 'THAT CRACKER ASS MOTHFUCKIN BEYOTH!"
i don't know I just had to put cracker ass
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MegaAnimeFreak7 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
he better not die!
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yaoilover123yaoi Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ohz noez poor naru :'(



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oh you're not gonna beleive this -rufous (so random!)
dattebyo-naruto
smozo-fin the human
GO ICEIPEA!NO ICEIPEA!-ice king
(>")> <("<) (^^)
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Yaoi-is-awesomeness Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011
oh noes naruto passed out from the hot water again!!!! :( (poor sasuke forgot thats what did it last time) :o hope he comes outta t3h coma!!!!!!!!!!!! ( i keep forgetting to do sumthin so thts why you'll see this three times) :'( :tears: poor naruto TT^TT
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Yaoi-is-awesomeness Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011
oh noes naruto passed out from the hot water again!!!! :( (poor sasuke forgot thats what did it last time) hope he comes outta t3h coma!!!!!!!!!!!!
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face the wrath of my chainsaw MWAHAHA :chainsaw:
i luv cookies :w00t!:
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Yaoi-is-awesomeness Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011
oh noes naruto passed out from the hot water again!!!! D: :(
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face the wrath of my chainsaw MWAHAHA :chainsaw:
i luv cookies :w00t!:
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CielStalker Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE YOU OMG
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StupidFox930 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
moar Moar MOAR I LOVS It I LOVS it I LOVS it. Great job!
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EMOgoth1998 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011
i hope you fin ish the next chapter soon i realy love it
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fartudetu Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
Great story!
Waiting for chapter 8!
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SasukelovesNaruto337 Featured By Owner May 3, 2011
Lol I really like this can't wait for the next one!!!
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SasukelovesNaruto337 Featured By Owner May 3, 2011
lol I really like this can't wait for the next one!!!!
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flowerpower138 Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
if im correct 3 DAMN YEARS HAVE PAST AND YOU DIDNT FINISH THIS COME ON ITS A FREAKING AWSOME STORY SO pleas finish it
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SasukelovesNaruto337 Featured By Owner May 2, 2011
:)
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StupidFox930 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
Great job! Did you get my note about the crossover?
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lxlightforever123 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011
WHEN
The
Next???
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krisscat Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010
WHEN DOES 8 COME!!??
today i read all 7 parts xP
i love it!
YAY FOR SASUNARU!
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krisscat Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
when is the next ready??
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hyperunge7 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Student Photographer
i love it *3*
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Me-and-Missy Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Where's the next chapter???!!! Huh Huh??!! You better not try to stiff us!!!
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