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SasuNaru Chapter 1

"Thanks for taking me out Sasuke" Sakura says sweetly.
"Yeah, whatever.." Sasuke replies.
Sakura pouts out her lips in an attempt to kiss sasuke. But he turns and starts to walk away. Sakura looks sadly to the ground, turns, and heads home.

On his walk into town Sasuke comes opon Naruto who was headed to the ramen shop.
"Hey Sasuke" Naruto shouts as he waves at Sasuke with a big grin on his face.
"Hey" he responds with a blank stare on his face.
"Want to get some ramen with me?" Naruto asks.
"I guess" he says.
Naruto and Sasuke sit down and start to to eat. Naruto looks over and asks, "So what are you doing in town?" with his mouth half full.
" I was on my way out of town actually, i wanted to go watch the sunset on the beach," Sasuke pauses to think for a second, " you can come if you want."
"Cool!'" Naruto says as he slurps up the rest of his noodles, "lets go!"

Sasuke and Naruto head out twords the beach.' I can't belive he invited me to go with him' Naruto thinks to himself as he stares at Sasuke.
"What?" Sasuke askes
" Its nothing.." says Naruto as he looks away.
"Well we're here" Sasuke says as he sits down in the sand. They get there just as the sun is starting to set. Naruto sits down next to Sasuke.
"Wow...it's beautiful!" Naruto says as he stares at the sunset.
"Yeah, it really is. I come here to think sometimes" Sasuke tells Naruto. 'Wow, he's in a pretty good mood tonight. And he looks pretty good too...' Naruto thinks to himself, blushing slightly.
"Didnt you have a date today?" Naruto quetsions.
"Yeah...i did." Sasuke says nervously as he looks away from the sunset and down to the sand.
"Did i say something wrong?" Naruto asks
"No..i just dont want to talk about it. I only went on it to shut her up. I have no interest in her what so ever" Sasuke says convincinly.
"Hmm, figures, you never like anyone" Naruto says smugly.
"Thats just  what i WANT everyone one to think. But that doesnt mean i don't like someone" Sasuke says as he leans back putting his weight on his elbows. Naruto lays back on his side facing Sasuke, resting his head on his hand that his elbow is proping up. "So you like someone? he says, interested.
"I have now for some time" Sasuke says openly.
"What?! Every girl in towns interested in you! Whoever your interested in, im sure you could have" Naruto says using his hands to sit him up.
"Who said it was a girl...?" Sasuke says with a smirk on his face looking directly at Naruto.
"Wait, what?" Naruto says, very confused, "I never thought that you were..."
"Gay?" Sasuke says continuing to smirk "Theres alot of things you dont know dobe." Naruto surprised, thinks to himself 'He acts so confident and cool, even when he is talking about somthing like this!'.
"So...who do you like?" Naruto says trying to act casual.
"Well, if you really want to know, i'll tell you. But it's a secret, so you cant tell any one" Sasuke says. He slowly moves towards naruto, gently pushing him back into the sand. He puts one hand on either side of him. He pushes his hair back and smiles. Slowly, he leans down and whispers into his ear, "It's you." Naruto face turns bright red, eyes wide open as sasuke gently kisses his forhead. Suddenly Sasuke gets up.
"Its getting dark, i have to head back. Later fox boy." Sasuke says in a kinda cocky, but cute tone, as he starts to walk away.

Naurto just lies there in shock, face still bright red, not being able to move. 'He...he likes..me?..'





                                                       
This is my first fanfic, let alone a SasuNaru fanfic. But they are my favorite pairing and i have alot of ideas for storys about them, so i decided to share them.

I suck at spelling, so if there are errors, please ignore them. On my new computer i have no spell check in the program im using =(

I will also add a title later when i think of a good one

Chapter 2 -- [link]
Chapter 3- [link]
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Hetafans123 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, si, si, si, si, si, si, si, si, si, si, si, si, oui, oui, oui, oui, oui, oui, oui, oui, oui, oui, oui, oui, oui, da, da, da, da, da, da, da, da! Kawaii aru~ (Only way to described my hyperness)
-Nightpelt
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sikakira Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
pretty good!
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baldingbeauty Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
This sounds interesting.
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AdamLoveless Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Artist
YAYI am a dummy! 
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Tammiechan Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Aww so cute !!! I love it (faints )
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XryugafangirlX Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist
LOVE THIS STORY! xD:D
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BassyBenitz Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
That is very cute if I were naruto I wouldn't have been able to move
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Kurohimex105 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awww that's so cute!
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MegaAnimeFreak7 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
:iconadorableplz:
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CielStalker Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
OMGOMGO,GP,GPDKJG;OZ;NELIGKTGREYUNELDRGHDLERIHJRKTIYHRKIXHU LHFI I ;LOVE IT!
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blackpandajj Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Student Artist
Awesome~ :iconmonkeyloveplz:
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NarutoROCKZ21 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
Aww, this is so cute ! :D
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lailack Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
hihi
great story^^
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Mayaxxxx Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
loved it!XD
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EmiliaVampira Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2009
omg this is so adorable! i cant wait to read more ^_^ haha omg if i was naruto and sasuke was leaning over me i would have had a heart attack XD
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uchiha-uzumaki4ever Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
love it! :adoration:
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NicoNoa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~ it's lovely~ and sweet~ and I love it~ :heart: :heart: :heart:
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lovelessfurubakare Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2009
OMG this was fucking AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
do u mind if i draw that olast scene ?? whenn they r on the sand??? i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ima go read the next two parts YAY
p.s_> this made my day , keep up the awesomeness!!
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Danii-Dream12 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009
WOO! God.. it turns me on 0-0 I lub SasukexNaruto.. YAOI PAIRINGS ARE WIN! =p
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xxnarufanxx Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2008
nice job, can't wait to read two....whitch I think i'll do now!!!!
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MallaHopeless Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2008
OMG! This is sooo Good :P neeed to read next chapter :dance:
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XxBlackbubblesxX Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so far so good ill have to read the rest later
:love: it its so great thank god sakura didnt kiss sasuke
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NikkiFirestarter Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2008  Student General Artist
Hehe my friend was reading this and told me about it X3
So I decided to read it... I'm liking it so far ;) hehe
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maora-ichinomiya Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2008
aww kawaii!! thats really good! :+fav:
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:iconwarriorwithoutasword:
that was really cute ^^ and epecially good for a very first fanfic..
when sasuke said "who said it was a girl" I seriously choked.. that was one thing I didnt expect, I thought he was gunna say something like "Yeah, whatever.." LOL
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DestinyChild24 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2008
awwww thats so cute :3
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NarutoFreak-Oo Featured By Owner May 10, 2008
O.O I need to read chapter 2! OwO
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Catchra13 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
awww so far it's so cute!
It's truley amazing :]
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SexyBeast-Akamaru Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2008
aww!!! this issss sooooooooooo cute!!
its my first fanfic that i've read... annd i really like it! nice job ^_^
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Moonshine586 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008  Student Filmographer
awww, this was a cute first chapter! I love when people write fics when sasuke is like full of hubris and pride about being gay. haha
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kissmyassnojutsu Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008
awwwww.
kawaii.
i love it. :D
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SasunaruXD Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2008
So cute,Fave!
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XxBlackbubblesxX Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i agreee need to read more
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Gumbah Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
i have the rest of the chapters in my gallery! =)
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cHeWyisG00D Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2007
yay! *goes on to chappy 2* i love eeeet!
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Moonshine586 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008  Student Filmographer
I just wanted to say that your icon makes me smile inside.

lol
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cHeWyisG00D Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008
thanks! =D
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Shokora-hime Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2007
MORE,MORE,MORE!

...

lol,that sounded so wrong. xD
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knurl Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2007
Very well written!
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Gumbah Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
thank you! =)
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emogirlS2 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2007
That was so cute!
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rydonloveistrue Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2007
omg that was so fricken awesome!
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awww ^_^
this one is kawaii
^__^
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NAOMEofthesand Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2007
who cares about spelling mistakes the couple and the storie are all that matters !!!!
bye the way awsome story !!!!!!!!
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Gumbah Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
thank you! =)
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kiisuge123 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2007
nice job
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Iiskola Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2007
One question: is it even possible to say someting in a kind of cocky but cute tone? xD
Spotted some grammar mistakes, otherwise very good :)
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Gumbah Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
only when it's comming from sasuke XDD
Thank you =)
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natsumixdaxninja Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2007
zomg. dis is really good! will yu be continuing it??
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ekaemma40 Featured By Owner May 26, 2009
hooray! I like it! And the beach was a good setting!
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